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A Loose Wire

A Loose Wire (Illustration) Poetry Ethics


   I heard your comments

But the static was loud

   We must have

A loose wire someplace.


   You heard my call

But noise interfered

   The line must have

A loose wire someplace.


   The room is quiet

We stand face-to-face

   Your message is lost

The loose wire's in me.

 

Author: Carole Bos

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Author: Carole D. Bos, J.D. 5199stories and lessons created

Original Release: Sep 16, 2013

Updated Last Revision: Apr 15, 2015


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From Marriage Is a Balance Beam, a book of poetry by Carole Bos.

 

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